Camp Melodrama - Episode Three - Part 10

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Episode Three - Part 10

Apr. 29th, 2007 at 2:47 PM

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The darkness was being pierced by shards of light, grey at first then shifting to pale blue and yellow-green. For a moment Jacob struggled to remember where he was and why he couldn't move. His father was driving, his mother singing along to a folk song playing on the radio while outside silvery spears of sunlight cut through thick summer branches. Something wasn't right.

Lenore: "'So kiss me and smile for me, tell me that you'll wait for me…'"
Jacob: "Mom?"
Lenore: "Are you finally awake? It's all right, Jakie, it's just a song. Try to relax, sweetheart."
Jacob: "What's going on?"

Carl: "You fell asleep, Jacob. We'll be home in just a few hours."
Lenore: "Hold me like you'll never let me go…'"
Jacob: "Everything hurts."
Lenore: "'Cause I'm leaving on a jet plane, don't know when I'll be back again.'"

Jacob struggled to see his parents' faces, but still couldn't move. Why had they put him in the seatbelt so tightly? He could hardly breathe.

Jacob: "Why can't I move?"
Carl: "I don't know. Why don't you tell me about how neurons work?"
Lenore: "'Oh babe, I hate to go.'"
Jacob: "I think I'm scared. I don't like this part. Why is everything so bright?"

Carl: "Georgia said Aunt Lois had another episode last week. Said she was talking to her like she was Uncle Jon."
Lenore: "How many does that make?"
Carl: "Three this year. She seems stable for the most part, but every now and then it's like wires get crossed in her head somewhere."
Lenore: "Poor woman. I'm glad she has someone looking in on her once in awhile at least."
Carl: "I'm just afraid that I'll have to put her in a home before too long. Ever since Uncle Jon passed…"

Jacob tried closing his eyes against the blinding light, but found it did nothing to diminish the harsh glare. It was getting very hot in the back of the car.

Lenore: "'Ev'ry place I go, I'll think of you. Ev'ry song I sing, I'll sing for you…'"
Jacob: "I want out! Let me out of here!"
Lenore: "It'll all be over soon, Jakie."
Jacob: "It's too bright!"

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sims2tales.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 29th, 2007 11:41 pm (UTC)

Oh dear ....

Hmmm, there's something very dodgy - and in a way oddly familiar - about Jacob's parents .... He's lucky that Emily found him, but as he'll probably tell her that Tristan knocked him out I hate to think what will happen next. At least she knows that Tristan hasn't exactly been himself since he had the drug, so she won't think he's switched sides. Thinking about where he could have gone is a bit of a worry though :-/

Loved this episode, and look forward to the next one!!

*dangles from large cliff*

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enchanted-black.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 29th, 2007 11:47 pm (UTC)

This is was brilliant. I can't wait for the next one (I try, but never can).

stolenglimpse.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 12:44 am (UTC)

You're leaving us on this note? Nooooo!!!! I need more. I wanna know where Tristan's off to and what was that with Jacob's... flashback?? And what's he gonna tell Emily? In what state will Tristan be when he'll be found/come back??

I'll be waiting impatiently for episode 4.

caffeinatedjoy.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 01:03 am (UTC)

Holy cliffhangers, batman!

I wasn't a nailbiter before, but I think you've turned me into one! *chews nails, waiting for the next DP*

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inyri-jax.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:48 pm (UTC)

so do you think she has taken my place as the Countess of Cliffhangers?

I do.

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no-last-words.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 02:45 am (UTC)

Wow! I love wondering what's going to happen next, awesome way to end it.

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goodbye-sun.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:00 am (UTC)

Superb job as usual, and as always, I wait in anxious anticipation for the next episode.

telephonic-line.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:12 am (UTC)

Tristan is so dumped. WAY TO GO CHAMP.

avec-aimez.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:27 am (UTC)

It's probably very, very wrong that I think evil!Tristan is very, very hot, no?

msbarrows.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:11 pm (UTC)

Nooooooo! Not a cliffhanger! You realise I'll now be obsessively checking the site several times a day for the next update, longing to find out what happens next... oh wait, I do that anyway.

Now I know why my own readers once threatened to form a lynch mob :D

oke-cokey.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 03:14 pm (UTC)

For some reason I thought Tristan was going to back Jacob's truck right over the top of Jacob.
Good thing I was wrong. XD

sim-fi.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 07:52 pm (UTC)

Please update again soon.......please...pretty please....with a cherry on top. :)

kestaa.livejournal.com wrote:

Apr. 30th, 2007 09:36 pm (UTC)

Ahhh! Thank god for Emily, but I can already see this going very, very badly. I never thought Tristan would be the big bad guy of season 2. (I'm holding onto my belief that it's temporary, but it's still disturbing.) But at least James is acting like himself again. Great to see more of Chris. I love a good bad guy! And is that last scene forshadowing? Are we going to see more of Jacob's history soon? *crosses fingers*

On the non-story front, I love how Mary and Emily's house is coming along. It's slowly moving from the tackiest house ever to somewhere I'd like to live. (Well, maybe without all the pink.) I'm seriously having a blast watching the decorating come along.

marigold-tales.livejournal.com wrote:

May. 1st, 2007 03:06 am (UTC)

8D Brilliant.

Aw poor Jacob and Tristan. D:

*pets them both*

ashlienl.livejournal.com wrote:

May. 3rd, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)

That's IT? The END? Ahhhhhhhh cliffys are TERRIBLE!

I hope Emily finds Tristan =/ But I'm glad she found Jacob; I was pretty worried about him. But zomg. What is UP with Tristan? He and Emily need to have a big long talk. Guh. And ANDREW! What the fuck is up with him? -dies-

What's going to happen when Jacob tells Tristan that it was HE who hurt him? EEEEEP NOT GOOD!

Kitten. Haha it amuses me. =)

tenna.livejournal.com wrote:

May. 4th, 2007 01:44 am (UTC)

AHHH CLIFFHANGER no. D:

I love Jacob. <3

kindredneonate.livejournal.com wrote:

May. 20th, 2007 06:33 am (UTC)

Love it, love it, love it!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

threerockfilms.livejournal.com wrote:

May. 23rd, 2007 06:52 pm (UTC)

Wow

This is my first comment on the story (I had to sign up to LJ to post this) and I just have to say wow. I've been hooked for a month or so, and I have to say it's mind blowing.

I was told about the story from a friend over at Arrendale Heights website. We both love the story. There's so much talent it's scary!! (In a good way)

I love Emily. She's damaged by her life but is still going...she's so strong. Mary is funny and beyond! I love her. I wish James didn't cut his hair!

I can't wait for more!

after-light.livejournal.com wrote:

Jun. 10th, 2007 06:52 am (UTC)

i think i've fallen in love...

okay, i am only a leetle bit late as to replying to this. but hopefully you'll stumble your way across it.

i was recommended this series QUITE a long time ago (shamefully), and never got the chance to start it. Luckily, I finally started it one day, and it's been a wonderful, amazing ride ever since. I just finished this episode tonight, and just swelling with joy at how much I absolutely love this series (and how glad that you have loaded it on here instead of the exchange...the exchange would ruin it for me somehow. haha)

From your brilliant, and witty dialog, to your complex, beautiful, deep (as well as angsty, heh) character and your just amazing plotline...deception pass is nothing but extraordinary. It has everything all at once, and yet connects to reader with such a simple thread that ties us all right in.

I live in the Seattle area myself, and frequently visit the real Deception Pass with my family (after all those relative visits o__o), and it always gives me such a thrill to just pretend as if the deception pass gang is somewhere out there, leading in their own dramatic lives (while walking the bridge with an aunt for the 43rd and a half time). So a definite thank you for that.

I could honestly keep going on and on about this. But perhaps I'll stop here. I know you MUST get a thousand compliments about this series a day, but I guess I'll just be another little fan to your enormous collection -- and I am so utterly happy of that fact. Thank you for creating this story. I don't believe writing for me will be much the same after looking to this with such adoration and inspiration.

^__^

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aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:

Jun. 14th, 2007 05:44 am (UTC)

Re: i think i've fallen in love...

I saw this a few days ago, but the only thing I can think to respond with is 'Thanks!' and a big stupid grin. ^_^

I'm so amused by your Deception Pass visits... every time I go there I look for them as well, but sadly never find them. Jacob lurks around the area, though. (http://pics.livejournal.com/gelydh/pic/001b6zfd/g80) (Ok, I admit that I did that... but... he was in my head and made me do it?) Have you been to ~~Bellie's~~ (http://pics.livejournal.com/gelydh/pic/0019ftfr/g80)? Ok stopping! XD

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after-light.livejournal.com wrote:

Jun. 18th, 2007 08:39 am (UTC)

Re: i think i've fallen in love...

haha, i will have to look for that "jacob carving" next time i'm there. and then shout excitedly "LOOK! it's the character from the story!! from you know...the sims...story..." as all my relatives question my insanity with bewildered stares. XD

I've actually been to the Cafe and Grill...or Bellie's ^__~! PLENTY of times in fact -- we go there whenever we come to DP around lunchtime. ahh, now i'll have to go out there sometime soon, if this chilly june air gets a leetle warmer, and run around finding all the gang's hang out spots, haha.

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alliecat37.livejournal.com wrote:

Aug. 25th, 2007 08:44 pm (UTC)

How happy am I that the next episode is already waiting for me? Very very happy.
How sad am I that the next one is the last one and I'm finally going to have to wait with everyone else to find out what happens next? Rather sad indeed.

simsbarbie.livejournal.com wrote:

Oct. 24th, 2007 12:52 pm (UTC)

emily..thank you dearly for saving jacob.

::raises my right hand::and emily, i will never say another bad thing about you ever again....i swear.

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cliched-lovex.livejournal.com wrote:

Nov. 11th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)

Emmie to the rescue!

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