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Episode Five - Part 15

  • Oct. 4th, 2007 at 3:06 PM
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Anthony: "Mary?"

She'd been in a meadow, surrounded by flowers. Suddenly she was plunged into darkness, Anthony's voice calling to her. The darkness slowly faded into a bright, orange light, and Mary opened her eyes. She found herself face-to-face with Anthony, unsure of where she was or how she got there. She blinked a few times as the memory of the previous night slowly came back to her.


Mary: "Hi."

Anthony smiled.

Anthony: "Hi. Did you sleep well?"
Mary: "Apparently. What time is it?"
Anthony: "It's eight o'clock."
Mary: "Eight o'clock? I can't have been asleep for more than five minutes."
Anthony: "Eight P.M. I have to get to my shift at the hospital."


Mary: "You let me sleep all day?"
Anthony: "You needed the rest. In fact, I'm going to take you home and I want you to go straight back to sleep."
Mary: "If you say so. It's not like I have a job to get to."
Anthony: "Come on, then. I've got the car running already."

Anthony helped Mary to her feet and she followed him out to the car. The walk was enough to sap whatever energy she'd had upon waking, and she slid into the passenger seat with a sigh of relief. Anthony closed the door and walked around the car, getting into the driver's seat and pulling out of the driveway.


Mary: "I've never been so tired in my entire life. Not even when I had pneumonia. Or hypothermia."
Anthony: "Really?"
Mary: "No, I'm totally exaggerating. Hypothermia is a bitch."

Anthony chuckled.


Mary: "I think I'll go apply for a job at the library. That place seems good and boring."
Anthony: "I can't really see you working in a library."
Mary: "Are you kidding? I'd be brilliant. I'm great at scowling at people and shushing them."
Anthony: "And yet not that great at enjoying the quiet yourself."
Mary: "Maybe I could use a bit more quiet."
Anthony: "I suppose it couldn't hurt. Well, here we are."

Anthony stopped and shut off the car, then rushed to Mary's door to help her out.


Mary: "I'm just tired, I'm not actually wounded."
Anthony: "You were shot, you had your nose punched in by a door, and you seem to be limping."
Mary: "I think I twisted my ankle kicking one of those stupid kids. But it's fine. Nothing a little Ibuprofen won't fix."

Anthony helped her to the door, watched as she unlocked thirty-seven or so locks, and then helped her to a chair in the kitchen.


Mary: "Thanks."
Anthony: "Are you sure you'll be okay alone?"
Mary: "I'll be fine, I promise. Go to work and save someone else's life for a change."
Anthony: "Yes ma'am. Here's my pager number, call if you need anything."
Mary: "Sure thing."


Mary watched as Anthony left. Once she could no longer hear his car, she stood up, hobbled to the refrigerator and got out the milk, then grabbed a bowl from the cupboard. She reached for her box of cereal, finding it alarmingly light, and poured out nothing but a small note that read, 'Sorry!!! Beer in the fridge. Love, Markus.'

She took a deep breath and let it out slowly. It was one thing to be attacked by killers and vampires. It was quite another to come home to an empty box of Count Chocula, betrayed once again by someone who was supposed to be your friend.

She put the milk away, grabbed a beer, and went in search of pajamas, stopping along the way to fill the bathtub with warm, sudsy water. She prayed that by the time she got out, Alton Brown would be on the Food Network to distract her from the lack of chocolaty, crunchy goodness.


Mary: "You would not believe the night I had. First of all, Markus seems to have eaten all of my Count Chocula."
Emily: "He did? Are you sure it wasn't… I mean, that bastard!"
Mary: "I know! Who even let him in here, anyway?"


Mary: "And then-hey, are you even listening to me?"
Emily: "Isn't that Bellie's?"


Newscaster: "Tonight, police and the fire department are still investigating a fire that destroyed a local favorite diner in Deception Pass. There were no injuries or fatalities as the diner was shut down earlier yesterday morning while police investigated two separate hostage situation that occurred last night. In the first, two suspects shot and killed a police officer before fleeing. A second officer is still missing. Following that, William Billington, who is accused of killing his girlfriend and her lover, took two hostages before police shot him. Billington is recovering from a single gunshot wound and is in critical condition. One of the diner's servers was also injured in the scuffle. She was treated and released at the scene."


Mary: "Well that about sums things up, with the obvious exception of the involvement of several vampires. I can't really imagine how things could have gone any worse."
Newscaster: "In other news, local businessman and multi-millionaire Andrew Stone put in his bid for Mayor of Deception Pass this afternoon."


Mary/Emily: "You've got to be kidding me!"

Comments

[identity profile] kiriux.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2007 11:14 pm (UTC)
Brilliant episode, well worth the wait. :3
[identity profile] tenna.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2007 11:23 pm (UTC)
omgyay. As much as I'm still a big fan of Mary/James, Mary and Anthony seem so deliciously cute together.
[identity profile] mikki-amboree.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2007 11:31 pm (UTC)
This is just the icing on my great day. Thanks so much you guys!! ^____^
[identity profile] redqueenofevil.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2007 11:51 pm (UTC)
Nice job on this episode. Loved the back story, and the "evil squirrels" bit was brilliant!

[identity profile] sims-gone.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 12:12 am (UTC)
Yay! I'm super sick, so when my husband said that I had 15 new emails from Livejournal, it made my night!

I liked this episode. Lots of action and ass kicking by Mary.
[identity profile] pharos-anchor.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:00 am (UTC)
Brilliant episode! I love Mary - she is easily my favourite fictional character. She reminds me so much of Stephanie Plum, in the Janet Evanovich books. Anyway - thanks for another funny and intense episode!
[identity profile] reginah72.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:05 am (UTC)
Wow that was so worth the wait!! I was so happy to see the updates I made my son go to bed early just so that I could read them. Thank You!
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[identity profile] msbarrows.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)
Great episode! I loved it!
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[identity profile] enchanted-black.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:59 am (UTC)
Great job. Loved the diner scenes and Mary's vampire vanquishing. Blowing up the diner? Sheer genius.
[identity profile] fireflower314.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 02:02 am (UTC)
Oh godddd. All that AND Andy putting in a bid to run for mayor? Hahaha!

This episode was definitely worth the wait, and now I'm dying to see episode 6. ^_^ Thanks for posting this! I take it your game is working properly again? I hope you won't have to deal with any more glitches.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 16th, 2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
It seems OK so far! I'm backing up regularly to an external hard drive these days because I'm still a bit wary of my internal hard drive after it decided to have those seizures earlier. ^_~
[identity profile] sim-fi.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 02:12 am (UTC)
Great episode. I absolutely love Mary! Can't wait for the next installment.
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[personal profile] steph wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 02:39 am (UTC)
I was so excited to come on the internet tonight and see an update. This was great, since I <3 Mary x 1,000. Very good, thanks so much!!

Oh yeah. This is my first comment to the story. :-) Just saying you guys do a great job!
[identity profile] night-revenant.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 02:45 am (UTC)
Patience is a virture and now I know why. That episode was fantastic! I absolutely love it, everything about it ...especially James' little "glare/stare" at Anthony. That was interesting.

Mary kicks ass, completely and totally, and I adore the last two lines. Classic.
[identity profile] inyri-jax.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 04:47 am (UTC)
OK ... I'm screaming with laughter in with this one! Nice ending!
[identity profile] anoramic.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 11:38 am (UTC)
With particular amusement at the House/Doctor Who references, this was a brilliant episode. But I have to ask..

Did you you decide to burn down Bellie's before or after you had game troubles?

;)
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[identity profile] msbarrows.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 04:23 pm (UTC)
Well, there were references to what was happening at Bellie's throughout the previous episode, so I'd guess "before".
[identity profile] anoramic.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)
Haha, I know, I was asking in jest.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 16th, 2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
It was amazingly theraputic. XD
[identity profile] anoramic.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 17th, 2007 03:15 am (UTC)
I just realized that James reminds me of Bono. I've been trying to figure that out for ages.
[identity profile] tez-na-nox.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:35 pm (UTC)
Masters of suspense you two be. Though I'm not to fond of Mary/Anthony (Mary/James FTW!) this episode was just stunning. Much easier to wake up to than baby crying for food (that is more autonomous and I feel like a zombie during that).

Minor Q: do you individually create every last extra or do you just press random in CAS and change a few minor things (hair, cloths, etc.). Cause that is a lot of extra's in most of these eps and most of them don't do much more than stay in the background.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 16th, 2007 09:17 pm (UTC)
What I tend to do is get a set ready to go, save, and then use the Tombstone of Life & Death to spawn random sims. They get make-overs as needed, and then when I'm done shooting a scene I just exit without saving. That cuts down on the number of 'randoms' wandering around. :D
[identity profile] tamih11.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
Ta Da
I didn't get to read until this morning, Friday. To be the end of the week and to start it off with a big helping of DP,it will proabably be down hill from here.
[identity profile] musicalsguru.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 04:13 pm (UTC)
Cheesecake, Dr Who, and Good Eats?! So worth the wait:)
[identity profile] baratron.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 08:03 pm (UTC)
Hello Kitty pyjamas = made of awesome. I want those in real life :)
[identity profile] angelina92.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 08:42 pm (UTC)
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! Once again. Wow, I'm just DYING to see what happens next, really!! Please don't delay the next episode's release because I won't stand the suspense!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!...........
[identity profile] marigold-tales.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
Anthony and Mary are so cute ahhhh

Geesh. D: Now, I'm confused! Mary/James or Mary/Anthony!

this part was amazing <3
[identity profile] tabbyphobos.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 09:53 pm (UTC)
The episode should have been called You've Got To Be Kidding Me.
[identity profile] simulatedchaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 5th, 2007 11:17 pm (UTC)
Fantastic "meanwhile, back at the ranch-" epidsode!
[identity profile] the-lost-sims.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2007 01:19 pm (UTC)
I never imagined that Mary would be a Hello Kitty person. Their house is really cool.
[identity profile] avec-aimez.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2007 08:28 pm (UTC)
awww, so cute!

by the way, I love James. A lot. And doctor who references. And...yeah!
[identity profile] necroticmind.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 6th, 2007 11:25 pm (UTC)
Exceptional and Fun!
What a brilliant episode. I loved it dearly. Just what I needed to start my weekend off right!!

[identity profile] mind-of-wind.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 7th, 2007 07:12 pm (UTC)
I can just agree with the great work and WOW, it's so sad I can't recomend Deception Pass to everyone I know, because they don't all know english, so they could not understand the greatness.

At first I didn't really like James, but he's actually smart and fun I've realized. And Mary and Anthony are like opposites attract, it's so cute, and he knows about vampires? Wow. There's just so much going on my head is spinning, and Andy put his evil plan (the latest one anyway, I love evil plans ^_^) in motion.

*takes a deep breath and relaxes* Wow. Keep up the good work, and may no more bad luck fall on you and your computer insted mey the bad luck be transfered as fire in your enemies pants. ^_~
[identity profile] simulatedchaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 11th, 2007 01:49 pm (UTC)
I reccomend it to everyone I know, but they can't appreciate that a sims-based vampire melodrama can be this good. Well...thier loss.
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[identity profile] sims2tales.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2007 07:39 pm (UTC)
It certainly was worth the wait *cheers* I'm starting to think that Anthony wouldn't be bad as a second choice if Mary can't hook up with James (it did look as if he was going to get cosy with Deanna when he got back from helping Emily). Great stuff! :)
[identity profile] simsbarbie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 25th, 2007 07:45 am (UTC)
wow..I have finally caught up from part 1 up until now. I absolutely love you lady's story. Thank you for the intertainment.
[identity profile] kayleenerz.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2007 02:37 am (UTC)
Ok, NOW is it over? I hope not. LoL. The link at the top isn't going any further. Or I could just be stupid. Either way. I don't really know how to navigate this site yet... since I only joined to post a single comment and failed at that. LoL.
[identity profile] frayed1989.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 29th, 2007 08:38 pm (UTC)
so i was sitting at my computer looking through my icons when i came across a few dp icons i had made back in the day so then i thought "oh man, i haven't read that forever and it started updating again" so i sat down at my computer and re-read the entire thing. needless to say it took three afternoons to do it but i have and it's just as awesome and as genius as when i last read it.

oh - man, don't every stop please. =]
[identity profile] after-light.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 17th, 2007 05:44 am (UTC)
i'm a little late - i know, how dare i NOT read a DP chapter the moment it comes out? haha

but compleeeetely wonderful as usual! god i love these characters. and mary - haha, mary never fails to make me laugh. thank you for putting so much time and effort into this - and for all that ass-kicking mary did...hahahaha SO worth everything.
[identity profile] shrunk-love.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 17th, 2007 05:27 pm (UTC)
Okay, I was being a little dim, and though it said 'no entries follow' it actually lied, unless I invented Chapter 5 out of desparation. Anyway, that was a fantastic chapter and I am literally salivating for more.

(If you're wondering where I've appeared from check out the post at the last part of Ch4)

*begs for more soon*
[identity profile] treesahquiche.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 5th, 2007 12:26 am (UTC)
I just love Dr. Sutherland more and more. He's so brilliant and doctor-y! I can't wait for the next episode. I wonder who's going to run against Andy for mayor ...
[identity profile] rosewalker.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2007 07:53 pm (UTC)
Huh. I guess Mary needs a new job, doesn't she.

[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2007 08:23 pm (UTC)
Brilliant!
[identity profile] rosewalker.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2007 09:01 pm (UTC)
Are you picturing Mary & Emily, sprawled on the living room floor with posterboard and markers, too?

Mary: "Hell no, we won't go!"
Emily: "Go where, Mary?"

[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2007 09:42 pm (UTC)
Absolutely! And... many empty beer bottles as well.

I bet Mary could make some really great posters for herself.
[identity profile] bokchil.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 29th, 2007 06:05 am (UTC)
I stumbled across a thread in some forum at the beginning of the week talking about this story here. I was bored and decided to take a look.

It took me three or four days but I finally managed to read through the lot of it (damn things like work and eating getting in the way of accomplishing it in a timely manner, however).

All I have to say is that this is absolutely fantastic. Everything about this series is great; the writing, the plot, the pictures, the characterization. XD I'm very drawn to it.

The characters are gorgeous. Emily is beautiful, most definitely. Alot of peoples' SIMs look like clones or have minorly altered default game faces. I think that's another reason why I'm growing so attached to this; everyone has their own distinctive look.

At the beginning I think my favorite character was Tristan, but now I'm very torn between Mary and Jacob. Mary's absolutely hilarious and Jacob is...well, he's certainly very interesting. I can only imagine what you have in-store for that boy.

I can't wait for another update. xD I'll be friending this journal, most definitely. I think I'll bide my time trying to root up some nifty DP icons to feed my addiction while I wait. >.>!

Also, this line from S2E5 part 11 made me laugh so hard I think I hurt myself: Mary made a mental note to avoid airplanes, tanning booths, roller coasters and Home Depot stores indefinitely as she watched Anthony clean and dress her wound.

I work at Home Depot, and believe me I wish I could avoid it indefinitely too. :[
[identity profile] lostnasimworld.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 30th, 2007 03:53 am (UTC)
When is the next eps coming out?
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 30th, 2007 06:15 am (UTC)
heh... I was wondering when that was going to be asked. XD

I've got large chunks of it written, know what I have to write, etc... but first I have to get over having strep throat and bronchitis (what a lovely xmas gift that was...). Needless to say, not getting more than a few hours sleep over the past five days hasn't really done much for my creativity. Best I can say is to keep an eye on [livejournal.com profile] sorrow_by_name, since that's where I do a lot of babbling as an episode evolves and approaches completion. I will get it done before the end of January, for my own sanity.

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