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Episode Four - Part Three

  • Jun. 20th, 2005 at 1:35 AM
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Andy pulled into his garage after dropping Emily off at home. Everything was going as planned- better than planned in fact. He'd figured her to be an easy target, but she was almost taking the fun out of it.


As the nearly-scalding water cascaded around him he came to the conclusion that, to make the game more interesting, he'd have to play her long enough to completely destroy her when the end finally came. He thought back to her easy smile and lingering embrace and knew he'd read her correctly from the start. Tomorrow would be a chance to work on his other angle of attack- tearing Tristan down through Emily.


Tonight, however, he had other business to attend to. Mary was proving to be a bit of a problem- he was having trouble trying to figure her out. What was her motivation in life? How did she handle adversity? How did the others' interactions with her differ from their true feelings?


Andy: "Ok this is going to be a quick meeting, and our last. I don't want to be informed of or involved in any of your plans after this. Where do we stand as of right now?"


Ace: "Mr. Peterson has everything set up and ready to go, sir."
Andy: "Is that right, Mr. Peterson?"


Chris: "After we spoke last night I was able to find a location secluded enough to work perfectly. It's set back from the main roads and hidden in some dense trees."
Andy: "I don't need to know anymore. Is there anything else?"
Chris: "I do have one question- how far am I allowed to go?"


Andy: "I want her left alive, Chris. Other than that, use your own discretion."


Chris: "Very well... I'll try not to break your little toy."


Andy: "You haven't forgotten what I can do to you if you do, right?"
Chris: "No. Not at all."


Andy: "Good. Now get out of my house."

Comments

[identity profile] my-sims-reality.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 10:51 am (UTC)
I'm glad you update in a collection of chapters because I can get my fix quickly. :) But anywho, great set, as usual, and you're leaving me wanting more. I also want to say again, how great you make your locations look. :D
[identity profile] prncs-sims.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 12:36 pm (UTC)
*waits for more*
[identity profile] pgh-anarchist.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 12:37 pm (UTC)
Ditto - locations are great. Now I want more. More I say! :)
[identity profile] beautysims1979.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 12:44 pm (UTC)
Wow, this is getting really, really good. The plot is definately thickening...

I can't get over how beautiful the locations are in this story. Amazing.
[identity profile] mrsbungle.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 05:26 pm (UTC)
fantastically gripping so far!
one question, where did you get the cars from? :)
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 09:42 pm (UTC)
http://www.modthesims2.com

^_^
[identity profile] weasley-hobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 09:19 pm (UTC)
Amazing story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I know people probably ask you all the time, but where did you get Emily's bed? It's simply gorgeous and I must have it. Oh by the way, your sets are simply beautiful. You are very good at decorating things in a room so it seems put together and well...decorated. I have a very ecclectic style and it seems I just put everything I like into one room, no matter if it really goes together or not, lol.
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 09:44 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I love making the 'sets' almost as much as I love writing the story!

I got Emily's bed at modthesims2. The bedspread came with a different bed than the one I have in the story. The site's being grumpy at me right now or I'd find the link for you.
[identity profile] weasley-hobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2005 11:20 pm (UTC)
Oh ok. Thank you for trying. :)
[identity profile] kitaoroshi.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 22nd, 2005 07:44 am (UTC)
More more! ^_^;; Loving everything about it!

And Tristan. Quite the looker he is. *_* ::shameless::
[identity profile] simsbarbie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2007 04:12 pm (UTC)
wicked....
[identity profile] walkerboh-rumor.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 18th, 2007 02:09 pm (UTC)
I love this more and more with each part!!:D:D