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Episode Seven - Part One

  • Jun. 27th, 2005 at 10:21 PM
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Mary: "Why grandmother, what big teeth you have..."

Mary froze and stared at Chris' mouth. Suddenly she realized she couldn't feel her hands. Or her face. Or any other part of her body, most especially not her legs. Which would explain why the ground was suddenly racing toward her. 'So this is what fear feels like,' she thought. She didn't like it.


Chris had moved with her, and was crouched in front of her, predatory. His eyes met hers over the top of his sunglasses. He took her free hand in his, pulling it toward him.


His lips softly grazed the top of her hand, then with one swift, violent motion he twisted her wrist up and plunged his two sharp canines into a vein. Mary let out a yelp and tried to pull away, which only made Chris hold on harder.

She had never felt a pain quite like it. It was deep, and she felt a pulling sensation all the way up her arm. Then, just as suddenly as it had began, it was over.


Mary: "Well that's going to need antibiotics."


A wave of nausea hit her as she broke into a cold sweat. There was a loud but calming buzz in her ears while everything around her suddenly became very far away before vanishing in a wave of darkness.


When Mary came to, she wished she hadn't. Her stomach felt like there were fish swimming in it. She rolled onto her side, waiting for the dizziness and nausea to pass.

It felt like she had been out for hours, but when she looked up at Chris, he was just sliding her cage door shut.


Mary: "What, no juice and cookies?"


Chris: "I hope you know I'm not cleaning that up."
Mary: "Hey, who am I to question your housekeeping skills. Some people like the smell of fresh vomit."


Chris: "Ace, get a mop and take care of this."
Ace: "You've got to be kidding me..."


Chris: "Ace. Get. A. Mop."


Mary tried not to look as Ace cleaned. By the time he finished, her dizziness had subsided and she sat up.


Chris: "Was it good for you, Love?"


Mary: "That's a pretty risky game you're playing. I believe the terms of your arrangement with Mr. Stone were that I was to remain alive."


Chris: "Oh you'll remain alive, I'll see to that. But I've been given free run of you up to and including near death experiences."

Mary tried very hard to remain expressionless as she wondered who had "given" Chris free run. She saw a flicker of confusion pass briefly over his face.

Mary: "Well... good."
Chris: "Fine."


Mary walked into a corner and sat down, facing her captors. She hugged her knees to her chest with one arm and kept her wounded arm elevated, trying to look helpless as she planned her next move.

Comments

[identity profile] darkenedskiez.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 05:30 am (UTC)
*on the edge of her seat*

this is so damn exciting ^_^
[identity profile] darkestvoices.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 05:32 am (UTC)
Oooh, I love vampires. This is really getting good.
[identity profile] amberlyish.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 05:41 am (UTC)
omg he's so hot.

it's because he's the bad guy. and he has fangs.
[identity profile] tragicrabbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 06:24 am (UTC)
how'd you get the fangs?!
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 06:45 am (UTC)
Photoshop. ^_~
[identity profile] floraldesign.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 06:47 am (UTC)
I love this!!! I have read all of the entries so far, seeing as I just saw this now.
And I hope it's okay that I added you :D I cannot wait to keep reading, I hope you continue this and make it as long as it can be or create new stuff!
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 06:48 am (UTC)
Don't worry- we're planning on keeping this going for a *very* long time. ^_^
[identity profile] floraldesign.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 06:49 am (UTC)
Sweet deal!! :)
[identity profile] --debris.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 07:46 am (UTC)
Omgoodness I couldn't remember if I had added this or not, and I was panicking that I'd lost it, but then you popped up on my friends' page! Huzzah!

<3
[identity profile] lostinjune.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 09:51 am (UTC)
Post the next part! Post it post it!
[identity profile] bellznwhistlez.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 11:20 am (UTC)
you are a sims story genius! i adore you and want your autograph :-) can't wait til part two!
[identity profile] beautysims1979.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 12:30 pm (UTC)
Amazing. I am addicted to this journal. And best line ever : "Well that's going to need antibiotics."
LOL!
[identity profile] reinedepique.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 01:48 pm (UTC)
Okay, the fangs, the bite marks, the bruises, the blood around the lips?

A+++ for amazingness! I know magicians don't share their secrets, but...how on earth...?!?!
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 03:22 pm (UTC)
20-some years of pretending to be an artist.
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 09:31 pm (UTC)
Holy crap, I really hope that didn't come across as snarky!!! I didn't mean it to be, but now that I re-read it I think it may have. O_o
[identity profile] crying-kisses.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 02:30 pm (UTC)
Wow, this is a great story!
[identity profile] 99beauty-scars.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 05:53 pm (UTC)
i thought he had vampire fangs!! :D
[identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 09:06 pm (UTC)
Adding you, if you don't mind. LOVE the story!
[identity profile] deception-pass.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 09:30 pm (UTC)
Don't mind at all!! The more the merrier! :D

(I actually friended you to my personal journal- hope that's not a problem?)
[identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2005 10:07 pm (UTC)
Not at all! I added you back, too!
[identity profile] walkerboh-rumor.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 18th, 2007 03:09 pm (UTC)
Fabo.....Mary is fast becoming my fav thus far!! Love her....spunkiness:D