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Episode 15 - Part 19

  • Sep. 27th, 2005 at 5:09 PM
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Markus: "Viper! My arch nemesis! At last we meet!"
Viper: "HA HA! I've been tracking you for years, boy! You have no chance in this fight!"


Markus: "That psycho-babble won't work on me, Viper! Prepare to get your ass majorly kicked!"
Viper: "The granite is really made of dragonflies! I cannot possibly lose!"


Markus: "You failed to take into account my secret weapon!"
Viper: "You're bluffing! You have no secret weapon!"
Markus: "HA HA! Go ahead and believe that!"


Viper: "All this talk- are you afraid to actually fight?"


Markus: "I was just waiting for an invitation!"


Tristan: "Ow! What the hell was that for?"
Mary: "Are you really you?"
Tristan: "Yeah, I'm really me."
Mary: "Good, because I'm really me."
Tristan: "I figured as much..."


Mary: "You know, I'm really glad no one made it to my dream-world."


Tristan: "That bad?"
Mary: "That bad. What about yours?"

Tristan didn't answer right away, instead gazing contemplatively at a distant spot on the horizon. When he finally spoke, his voice was quiet and slightly strained.


Tristan: "I didn't stay long."
Mary: "Lucky."


Tristan: "I think Markus just worked out where he is."


Markus: "Please tell me you're not real."
Tristan: "I'm afraid we are. As real as it gets here, anyway, Captain Hero."
Mary: "Shall we go find Emily now?"


Tristan: "I already found her… she didn't make it."

Mary felt her stomach drop, a sickening feeling rising within her gut. It sounded to her as though he were trying to fight back frustration and losing.

Mary: "What do you mean she didn't make it?"
Tristan: "I mean she must have woken up."
Mary: "Jesus Tristan, could you please learn to choose your words a little better?"


Markus: "So it's up to the three of us, then. Did you work out how we're supposed to rescue James by any chance?"
Mary: "I haven't figured anything out, no."
Tristan: "I might have an idea, but I'm not really sure yet."
Mary: "Well... let's go find James then."

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[identity profile] seafeed.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 12:48 am (UTC)
This is so damn good.

It kept me away from my homework, BUT IT'S DEFINATLY WORTH IT.

♥♥♥
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_kismetx/ wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 01:06 am (UTC)
David Spade. Love it.

Whoa. This is preetty fricken crazzyawesome. Wow.

Oh, and I am sooo not procrastinating. But it was worth it :)
[identity profile] frayed1989.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 01:23 am (UTC)
awww, poor beautiful tristan!

can't wait for the next update.

i was really confused at first when i started this chapter but it's all very shibby. it makes me smile :D
[identity profile] my-sims-reality.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 01:38 am (UTC)
I decided to drop everything and just *read*
What can I say? All this is *perfection*!

My favorite parts:

Abigail: "It is our human brains, our perceptions, that form the reality of the waking world. Likewise, it is our brains that form the reality of the dreaming world; but the dreaming world knows no bounds and has no limits. Without your conscious senses and perceptions, you are unable to compare the dreaming world with the waking world and determine which is real. Thus, your senses and perceptions in the dreaming world make up its reality."

Abigail: "That's not what I said, child. What I said is the waking world is no more real than the dreaming world."

Episode 15 - Part 12 - The exchange between Mary and Dr. Sutherland.

Episode 15 - Part 13 - Anthony: "Mental note: Hospital food and campfire stories do not a good date make."

Episode 15 - Part 15 - David Spade cameos!

Episode 15 - Part 17 - Heart-pounding chapter. And Tristan in that sexy outfit? *To die for* :D
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:29 am (UTC)
Re: I decided to drop everything and just *read*
:D Thanks!

Part 17 was one of the first parts I did for this episode- right after we got back from DragonCon in fact. It's still one of my favorites.

The rest of what you mentioned was all [livejournal.com profile] rosewalker! I love her writing. ^_^
[identity profile] heatherizcool.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 02:00 am (UTC)
First and foremost: DAVID SPADE!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I also liked the bit with Pat Sajak on the TV. Your Photoshop work is incredible.

In other news.... Andy and Emily: boooooooooo!!! I was seriously skeeved out when I saw their little bit of passion. Blech. We all know Emily needs to end up with Tristan, plzkthnx.

All the dream sequences are so wonderfully bizarre. I love how you've been able to use the new elements of Nightlife in this chapter... great stuff. I lovedlovedloved when Mary went back to the hospital. James paid her bill, huh? Very interesting. And not only was the story the doctor told her about Kat downright creepy, but he clearly has a crush on Mary and that's so cute. Except for the part where she has to end up with James. But still. It's still cute.

Best lines:

"He is in the dream world."
"And this is news because...?"

Hahahaha.

And of course:

"Hey, I don't always have to be Scullyrific, you know."
and "Stop the bus, Mulder, this is where I get off."

I fucking love the X-Files! And X-Files references are even better! XD

I can't wait to see how they get James out of this one. Although Crazy!James would be kind of hot. *ahem* I love Markus's superhero persona too. Oh this whole series is just a deliciously fun romp...

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:32 am (UTC)
The funniest part about the NightLife stuff is that most of this was written *before* the EP came out! On top of that, [livejournal.com profile] rosewalker doesn't even own the Sims so she just writes stuff- most of it completely meshed with the new aspects of NL!!

I need to stop making DP videos and write more... :\
[identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 02:39 am (UTC)
As everyone else, I loved the David Spade thing. Unexpected and funny.

I also like that "I" got to smooch James. >:)


Can't wait for the next installment!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 02:52 am (UTC)
:D

Thanks for letting us use your name! I couldn't wait for you to read this and see what we'd done with it. ^_^
(no subject) - [identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com - Sep. 28th, 2005 03:18 am (UTC)
[identity profile] deelybopper.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 03:21 am (UTC)
OMG I LOVE IT!!!
JAMES! mary's STRIPPING!!

i don't think it gets much better than that... well, maybe. *passionate kissing*.... "you're a jackass." ahahahaha. i love tristan wistan...

this chapter might just be my favorite yet.
[identity profile] deaddollsmile.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 03:58 am (UTC)
LOVED IT! but ..what else is new?

i can't wait for you girls to update! this is the *best* sim story ever
[identity profile] 99beauty-scars.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 04:19 am (UTC)
i loved the dream parts. they are amazing.
i really laughed at Tristan telling James that there was purple flying elephants like dumbo. hahaha the look on tristan's face was so funny.

i also wanna say that Mary was BEAUTIFUL in the 1st few dream squences.

i also giggled because i notice that we have some of the same clothes and hair for our sims! :D

that was just awesome, so worth the wait. IMO i think this was the best episode so far, i just loved it.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:34 am (UTC)
Isn't it trippy to see something your own sims wear on someone else's sims? It's almost like they snuck into the closet and stole the outfit or something!
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[identity profile] ketty-muan.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:06 am (UTC)
Wow!
That was really great!!
[identity profile] prescilla-bean.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:19 am (UTC)
as always, LOVED IT. i can't wait till part 2. ^_^
[identity profile] chatya8tergrl00.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:58 am (UTC)
Well thats one more homework assigment I'll have to do during lunch...
(no subject) - [identity profile] chatya8tergrl00.livejournal.com - Sep. 28th, 2005 07:01 am (UTC)
[identity profile] mcdchick923.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:17 am (UTC)
OMG - totally new to this journal.. and I went back and read every.. single.. episode before this. @_@ Sleepy, but damn so worth it. Excellent! I can't wait for the next part!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:42 am (UTC)
Yay!!! Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D
[identity profile] jaenanda.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:22 am (UTC)
I seriouslhave such a silly girly crush on Tristan. Emily is such a fool. But then, I've been in her shoes, too- I'm just glad I got smart and went after the right guy *eventually*.

And dude. I'm so making a "Spooky" shirt. I know this place at the mall that'll print whilte logos on black shirts and I've already got my design down pat.

ha! Worth waiting for, yes, but I want moooooooooooooooooore!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:41 am (UTC)
*wipes tear from eye*
Here's the real life Spooky shirt I used- it sparkles:

http://www.oldnavy.com/browse/product.do?cid=8367&pid=314509

I want to write moooooooooooooooore, so that's good! :D
Re: *wipes tear from eye* - [identity profile] jaenanda.livejournal.com - Sep. 28th, 2005 07:45 am (UTC)
[identity profile] mrsbungle.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 10:25 am (UTC)
this is so brilliant.
i should have gone to the laundrette an hour ago, but this was much more attractive.
good work, as usual.
cant wait for the next part. (how many more chapters will there be??) xx
[identity profile] rosewalker.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 01:04 pm (UTC)
:)

We plan on continuing the story until Fox cancels us. ;)

Kidding - but we have decided to go with more of a television episodic format, so we're pretty much writing until we run out of stories to tell (which won't be anytime soon, at this rate the story will outlive us!)
(no subject) - [identity profile] mrsbungle.livejournal.com - Sep. 28th, 2005 01:52 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] rainbow1nk.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 02:18 pm (UTC)
Wow, you were right. This chapter was very very long. I loved all of the placements and character dialogue. You are truly a gifted writer :)
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:43 am (UTC)
And that's only the first half!!! I think we'd have been too overwhelmed to have done this in any other way.
[identity profile] kitaoroshi.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:03 pm (UTC)
O_O

What more soon oh goodness me. So much love! I love the little quirks. David Spade. The red streaks in Tristan's hair. And so many other things that I'll just be parroting off the entire chapter back at you.

But yes. The last picture in Part 17? The expression on Tristan's face? I want to cuddle him so, the little worried darling. The poor dear!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:42 am (UTC)
hehehe Thanks!! We had a lot of fun with the first part of this chapter!

And yeah, I love that last picture in 17 so very much. I'm very happy with how it turned out- especially the colors and his expression. Which is pretty much the whole picture.

I'm babbling now.
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[identity profile] kinomotosun.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:24 pm (UTC)
This was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.

I think I have fallen in love with Tristan. Seriously. He is the man of my dreams. ^_^ Emily's so stupid, overlooking him for Andy, and Tristan really really cares about Emily. *sniffs* Poor Tristan. He needs some lovin's!

I can't wait to see more. Keep on writing~!

I just hope it doesn't take another month for the next chapter to come out. ;)
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:40 am (UTC)
I just hope it doesn't take another month for the next chapter to come out. ;)

It shouldn't!! :D
[identity profile] krzzt.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 06:35 pm (UTC)
words just can't describe how much i love this story. it's so well done. every detail is perfect. i can't help but love all the characters. james and mary are my favorites, though. can't wait for the next installment. :)
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[identity profile] jadeakira.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:02 pm (UTC)
I love both of you for writing this and putting it together. I really do.
[identity profile] loweryourwand.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 07:22 pm (UTC)
Um... GENIUS what else is there to say? I am hooked, HOOKED. Was almost late to school because couldn't tear away from computer!

Muwahhahahha I love Tristan so.

Markus' suit, hehehee.
[identity profile] sheerfreesia007.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 28th, 2005 09:18 pm (UTC)
The last picture in part 17 is BEAUTIFUL! I loved that pic. Oh and I've got a crush on James for some reason. Very nice job!
[identity profile] kaity-boo.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 29th, 2005 12:17 pm (UTC)
Randomly found this journal while looking up sims 2 stuff. Wow. I love this story, it's addictive! I've been up most of the night reading the entire thing. Very well written and i cannot wait for the next update! I want to jump on the tristan/emily bandwagon!! haha

I'd like to add this journal as a friend, is that alright? :)
[identity profile] rosewalker.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 29th, 2005 12:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks! And yes you can absolutely add us if you don't mind us adding you back. :)
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[identity profile] ladydragonair.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2005 05:36 am (UTC)
The story is great1 I hope you don't mind me friending you to keep up.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2005 06:50 am (UTC)
Thanks!!! We don't mind you adding us at all!! :D
[identity profile] eloise.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2005 12:53 pm (UTC)
Hooray! I am finally up to date with the storyline! I can't believe how much you managed to write during my holidays!

It's still as fantastic as ever, if anything, it gets better and more enigmatic with each chapter. Go you!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:36 am (UTC)
You went on holiday at the right time! It was almost a month between updates here!
[identity profile] pgh-anarchist.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2005 05:52 pm (UTC)
I absolutely LOVE this storyline! I'm so hooked. I've got a girly crush on Tristan and James. And Marcus has this Lenny Kravitz thing going for him too where he's hot.

Emily and Andy - too much ick factor - ewwwww. Andy grosses me out, I want to smack some sense into Emily.

Where/when is the next installment? :)
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 1st, 2005 12:36 am (UTC)
The next installment is currently being untangled in our heads- we know where we're going, we just have to work out how to get there. ^_^
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