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Episode 16 - Part 23

  • Oct. 30th, 2005 at 3:32 AM
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Heather: "It's kinda sexy."

Tristan blinked hard, clearing away the horrifying vision that had played out in his mind in only a fraction of a second. His stomach lurched-he had to fight hard to keep from vomiting. Was that really what was hiding inside him?


Tristan: "You should be afraid. Go home. Get out of this place, before it eats you alive."


The girl stared at him in stunned silence, fighting to understand what was happening.

Tristan: "Go!"


She took off running from the alley, her footsteps ringing in the emptiness. Tristan continued to stare at the ground where she had stood in front of him, his mind a blaze of pain and confusion.


Chris: "I knew you didn't have it in you. How disappointing."


Tristan: "Somehow, disappointing you doesn't bother me in the least."


Tristan turned slowly and began to make his way from the alley, his path before him clear for the first time in months.

Comments

[identity profile] heatherizcool.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 30th, 2005 04:46 pm (UTC)
OMG WAIT. Did he... ibba.. whabba.... was it just a....?

Damn, I was kind of excited to be dead. LMAO.

Oh well. Being alive is pretty good too.
[identity profile] snatchphoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 31st, 2005 04:59 am (UTC)
boooooo!

*hiss*

ok not that killing off [livejournal.com profile] heatherizcool was a good thing...but the animalistic Tristan was!

you tease!
[identity profile] obigrrl.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 31st, 2005 09:14 pm (UTC)
*blink*

K...but he's still a god!!!!

*grins*
[identity profile] ratherunlikely.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 31st, 2005 10:46 pm (UTC)
Yay, Tristan! I should have known from the start that you wouldn't let me down!

*beam*

[identity profile] baratron.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 27th, 2005 02:16 am (UTC)
*squee*!
[identity profile] idiotsoverdose.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 11th, 2006 03:11 am (UTC)
sniffles
D: I am somewhat dissapointed.
oh well -siiiiigh- xD
[identity profile] doktor-macabre.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 3rd, 2006 10:12 pm (UTC)
Well, damn.
I quite liked animal!Tristen.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2006 04:57 pm (UTC)
im glad it was just a dream.

<3
[identity profile] stolenglimpse.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 26th, 2007 09:38 am (UTC)
Oooh! Vision/dream thing. Phew. It still totally could have happened. bad!Tristan was pretty sexy. Not that he isn't when good but... damn!! *g*
[identity profile] simsbarbie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 11th, 2007 02:22 pm (UTC)
i wonder what james is doing right now.....
[identity profile] lov3izfragil3.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:24 am (UTC)
that was intresting....., lol! It was one of those serious parts. I like serious tho and humor. What a coincedence your story has both. lol.

*reads more*
[identity profile] xxsuccessfailxx.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2009 11:08 am (UTC)
thank god...am i the only one happy about this? xD
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[identity profile] phoenixdaisy.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2013 11:27 am (UTC)
I... don't know if I'm disappointed or not.

On one hand, Tristan turning to the dark side and embracing his basic needs was totally hawt.

On the other hand, Tristan's angsty love of life is while coping with the monster hiding within is endearing.

>.> My brain just gave me a Lestat/Louis comparison. Very nice.