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Episode 17 - Part 5

  • Dec. 2nd, 2005 at 2:05 PM
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When we made it out of the bar and in to the inky blackness of the rural California night, I noticed an instant change in Frank's demeanor. He seemed to go from nervous to in control within seconds, something I hadn't been expecting. We were alone, and Frank was leading us further from the bar than I thought necessary.

Philip: "Look, um… I'm starting to have second thoughts about all this…"
Frank: "Is that so?"
Philip: "Yeah let's just… I'm not going to do this."


I made as if to bolt back to the bar, but Frank was suddenly in front of me, blocking my path. I did my best to remain calm, knowing that blind panic would only lead to certain disaster. I planned on making it out of there not only alive and in one piece, but with my dignity in tact as well.


Frank: "You really don't have to run away. It's not going to hurt a bit- you'll probably even enjoy it."
Philip: "Like hell!"


I did my best to shove him out of the way, fully expecting him to tumble easily to the ground. Instead, it was like hitting a brick wall. Frank didn't even flinch, but began to laugh. That's when I noticed his teeth.

Philip: "Jesus… what are you?"
Frank: "Hungry."


When he dove down and plunged his teeth in my neck, my first impulse was to panic outright. The number of thoughts that managed to flash through my head within a fraction of a second still amazes me some 70 years later. I remember trying to fight back before an idea caught hold in the storm raging in my head. As unbelievable as it seemed, I realized I was quickly becoming dinner for a hungry vampire.


I'd heard the stories told by guys late at night when we'd be huddled around a fire for warmth after working together all day. Some of the older fellows spoke of friends who'd go missing after a tryst with a mysterious stranger at a bar, their bodies found a few days later drained of blood with wounds like those from an animal attack. Most of us would laugh, passing it off as the gibbering of superstitious old men.


As the stars above me began to fade away, I knew what I had to do in order to survive. I summoned the last of my strength and bit back just as hard as I could. The only thing I can clearly remember now is the smell of soap mixing with the scent of blood, and thinking what an odd combination it was. The pain was gone instantly, replaced by a mind numbing euphoria that made me bite even harder.


I remember Frank suddenly leaping back, clutching his neck as I stumbled forward in front of him. I remember the feel of the dirt below me- solid and real -while the stars above grew brighter.


Frank: "You little bastard! You almost killed me!"
Philip: "The… irony…"
Frank: "You're not getting any help from me, you maggot. I should drive a stake through your heart right now, but I think letting you burn up in the rising sun is a better way for you to go."


As Frank made his way back to the parking lot, leaving me in the field to disintegrate with the coming dawn, everything around me went black.

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[identity profile] mother-sim.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 15th, 2007 09:07 am (UTC)
Parking lot? That place didnt look like it would have a parkinglot.

Anyways - ive come this far in the story - been reading non stop for 3 days now between daily chores - and its the first time anything stood out like that. And its probably because of my lack of knowledge about the states in 1936. :) I have to say this:

YOU GIRLS R GREAT STORYTELLERS!!!! Your story is so well build, so professionally backed up by your pictures. And I was so impressed by Marys dream sequence in the car. Its the work of an intelligent writer.

I bow in the dust at your feet :)

Mother Sim, Denmark

P.S. Tristan is a wimp - as for Spike....eh...Chris *drool*
[identity profile] mother-sim.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 15th, 2007 09:08 am (UTC)
To the Top
...how i wish there was a 'To the Top' button.... :)
[identity profile] simmysarecool.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 8th, 2007 10:54 am (UTC)
I know I'm really late into the story but I loved reading it so far and decided to make an account to live journal. I love the story so far. I wish Emily and tristan would get together all ready :(
I still have no idea who this Phillip dude is. I am completely clueless.

(sorry for ant spelling errors. That is not my best subject in school.)
[identity profile] lov3izfragil3.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
lol
I don't know who Phillip or Frank are but Phillip is hot in a wird wimpy nineteen year old boy way lol.

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