![]() James watched Chris and Mary from over the rim of his glass. They had disappeared behind the crowd, and all he caught were momentary glances of them being completely inappropriate in public. They seemed happy enough, though it was a bit odd given Mary's feelings about vampires. Not to mention laughably ironic, considering the rift between her and Emily over Em's choice in men…
![]() Chris smiled to himself as Mary fell back into his arms. Her entire body language had changed to defeat. He didn't know why, and didn't particularly care. The girl was clearly damaged goods. As she turned her back on the bloke with the big hair and sank her body into his own, he almost understood Stone's joy at playing games with people. Someone held power over this one, and she was so blind to it she actually thought it was herself. The irony was so beautiful it almost inspired poetry.
Chris pulled away from her and kissed her on the cheek.
He walked away before she could respond, lighting a cigarette on his way out the door. As he congratulated himself on a job well done, wondering if Mary even had the faintest clue how easy it was to manipulate her, he suddenly found himself on the ground with his face in the cold cement.
Just as the pain from the blow to the back of his head finally hit, he was being lifted back off the ground and shoved into the brick wall of the building with such force he knew it wasn't human. It took a moment for his vision to clear before he could focus on his attacker. He grinned slowly at the fury on James' face. Chris: "Well, well-"
James: "DON'T talk. I don't want to hear a single word. The only reason you are not dust in the street right now is because I didn't have the presence of mind to figure out how to hide a pool cue on my person on my way past the bouncer. Have you heard of a restraining order? Because you've got one. If I EVER see you anywhere within a LIGHT YEAR of her again, your fuzzy little brain won't have the time to register my presence before the molecules that make up your body are scattering to the wind."
Mary: "Hey. Where'd you go?"
Mary paused. Mary: "…not feeling very well. Didn't you see him come out?"
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Comments
can't wait for the next update! :D
You have no idea how bad I felt for doing all that to Philip. He grew on me so quickly while making this episode. *sigh*
Patiently waiting for the next chapter of artistic genius that is known as Deception Pass,
Night Revenant
Artistic genius?? *grins huge*
Next episode will be out probably within a couple weeks!!
Definitely! Fantastic job on *EVERYTHING*!!! :DDD
o.m.g xD
Even more than I did before.
Can't wait for the next episode.
Thanks
thank you.
I miss Tristan =/ And why can't Andy die damnit?! lol :)
i couldn't for the life of me figure how philp was fitting into this, then when he met Jade, and all of them jumped him, i put ALL the pieces together, and even still was shocked. I mean i KNEW it, i just knew it, but it was still shocking you know what i mean?
oh and i have to say that i LOVE how you put all that stuff in the background, like the seattle ufo type dealy thing, and all those real nice buildings.
I also noticed that the purple hair vampire singing karaoke was one of the vampires that was killed off in one of your episodes. i can't remember her name, but yeah i was like "its her, its her!" i dont know why.
gah philp was so hot. lol
James was really hot in this episode too.
I love it. Fabulous! TWO to THREE tumbs WAY up! Sorry for all the yelling. It's been a while.
I'm a comment whore if you haven't noticed. ^_^
I think I am in love with James now... you are totally awesome and I can't wait for more!!!
Don't wait too long for the next one :P
I think I found a new life though.
Can't wait for the next update, almost has me inspired...almost.
You just showed James with a depth that was missing in the previous episodes, Mary starts feeling more human and Emily is now aware that she really feels something about Tristan (and I have to say I loved her refusing Andy's invitation to join his bath lol).
And... OMG Ian came back to get Emily! So bad Tristan isn't here to play hero, but I'm sure that Mary and James will manage with that jerk.
Love it!!!
But anyways, I like this chapter. Really puts the main story back in focus after all the sidetracks. Looking forward to the next one.
I read this the day it was posted but I wanted to go back and read it again before I commented. It was fabulous, per usual. JAMES. Of course, James is my simulated vampire platonic lifemate, but still, I was super glad to see him really 'take the lead,' so to speak. (Although, at one point, his hair did kinda freak me out. Hah.) Fantastic job; can't wait for the holiday episode!
Fabulous. I want more. You are an awesome writer.
Amazing episode as usual. Looking forward to 18! :D
♥
Awesome chapter! Emily's hesitation to bathe with
SatanAndy.. a sign of things to come? Dun-dun-DUUUUN!i love it. i love the kissing!
i do love Tristan so much, but the attraction to James is growing stronger...hehe, i wonder how they would feel about a threesome?! *giggle*
gah, D! you are such a genius..i can't wait for the next episode! i'll sit on pins and needles until then!
^_^
BRILLIANT episode, AS USUAL. Can't wait for eighteen (and Trissssssssssstannnnnnnnnnnn!!!)
Do you have a fixed idea of when the story will end? Obviously at some point, Andy's "game" will be revealed to most of the main characters. I'm wondering whether I need to start mentally preparing myself for it to end, or if it'll go on for as long as you still have ideas :) Like, perhaps, after the main story has finished, the characters might go off and do other stuff...?
I am also jealous of you because your lj Scrapbook is working. I want mine to work, damnit (http://www.livejournal.com/support/see_request.bml?id=527871).
So far these characters have managed to live on in various forms for about 15 years, so I reckon they'll never really get put to bed for good.
I miss Tristan. A lot. He needs to come back. Soon.
ANDZOMG IAN?!!>?
Another lovely episode. I love the triangle between James, Chris, and Mary. Oh the drama lol.
*mourns*
*takes a step back and sips apple juice waiting here for the artistic minds of the century to write another chapter*