Emily: "I'm home!"
Mary: "Hey Em."
Emily: "I brought Andy with me, I hope that's ok."
Mary: "Sure."
Emily: "I need to run upstairs and wash up a bit- we had some unruly lobsters for dinner tonight. Andy, maybe you can tell Mary the good news."
Mary: "Good news?"
Andy: "Emily told me what happened to you guys last night."
Mary: "Did she?"
Andy: "I had a team track the creature down- I wanted to let you know it's been captured and won't be a problem anymore."
Mary: "That didn't take long."
Andy: "They're a very effective team. I called them earlier this afternoon after speaking with Emily- by dinner tonight they'd called back letting me know everything had been taken care of."
Mary: "Fabulous."
Andy: "Listen, Mary- I'm sorry I haven't really had a chance to check in on you since..."
Mary: Oh I'm fine- no lasting damage, you know."
Andy: "That's really good to hear. How are your injuries? If they're giving you any problems just let me know- I can have my personal physician take a look at them."
Mary: "Injuries? I didn't have an injuries."
Andy: "I'm sorry, I must have remembered incorrectly."
Mary: "No big deal."
Andy: "I thought you might like to know my people have made some progress finding one of the men who did it. They're managed to track him as far as Nevada, so at the very least you don't have to worry about him hanging around town. Unfortunatly the other one, the one behind everything, hasn't been so easy to find."
Mary: "What about the other three?"
Andy: "Other three?"
Mary: "Yeah- the ones I played poker with for three nights."
Andy: "They're being tracked as well, I'm sure."
Mary: "Good. I don't want anyone who was involved getting away with it."
Andy: "Certainly not."
Emily: "What are we watching?"
Mary: "Iron Chef I think."
Emily: "Ooo I love that Takeshi Kaga guy!"
Andy: "Really?"
Emily: "I think his taste in clothes is out of this world!"
James: "We could have just called, you know."
Tristan: "Do you have their phone number?"
James: "Details..."
Mary: "I'll get that..."
Mary: "Oh look, the Wonder Twins! My evening is complete."
James: "It's lovely to see you again, too, Mary. Is Emily around? We really need to talk to both of you."
Mary: "She's in the other room with Andy. What's up?"
Tristan: "Could you please get her?"
Emily: "James! Tristan! I thought I heard you guys!"
Andy: "James, Tristan."
Emily: "What brings you guys here?"
James: "Well, it's about last night, actually..."
Emily: "Oh it's ok- he knows."
Tristan: "He knows?"
Andy: "Yes, and it's been taken care of already."
James: "So it was your people who got it?"
Andy: "You were after it?"
James: "Yeah but clearly we weren't fast enough to be useful or anything."
Mary: "Well James, at least you don't have to worry about catching rabies now."
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lol
^_^
loved the tattoos also, and i nearly died when andy and emily kissed... :(.
... but tristan is super hot.
(first comment, but def. not the first time i read your story :D).
Your comment just totally made my night!
But I tend to .. gorge myself on it, reading through it so quickly. Then I go back and re-read it.
And .. and this is kinda pathetic.. I go back and read from the beginning about once a week, so it's all meshed in my head properly.
First time poster, long time lurker. (Okay, more like three weeks.)
I just had to drop a line and say how addicted I am to this story. Everytime I see you've updated I get so excited I drop everything else to read it. I find myself thinking about it at work (which is mindless and torturous for me this summer) and I wonder what's going to happen next. Oh man, I'm so hooked.
What else to say. I love all the characters. Tristan is my favorite... omg he's so hot, especially with the hairstyle you gave him in this chapter. (I recognized it as a hair mesh I DLed from modthesims2, which is my favorite Sims 2 hair mesh I have. Much love for it!!) And the tattoos, of course... And vampires... I'm on such a vampire kick this summer, I started squealing with delight when I realized this story was going to deal with it. And I squealed again when we got to see Tristan and James's fangs (because I'd been suspecting from early on that Tristan was a vampire, but not James, it was like... double delight! XD) I love all your sets, skins, hair meshes, etc... and your photoshopping skills are superb. In short, you're writing the Sims 2 story I always wanted to write yet lacked the time/talent/inspiration to do.
And... is it wrong that I find Andy kinda sexy when he doesn't have his hair in that silly ponytail? o.O
I am waiting with bated breath for the next installment.
Thank you so much for commenting- it seriously makes us even *more* excited about the whole project!
I'm just going to sit here with a stupid grin on my face for the rest of the night while I work on the next part. ^_^
Praise is precious, so I always try to take time to give it to people who deserve it. (I'm a writer myself, I know how essential it is to know that you're being appreciated.)
Work, work like the wind!! I need more!! I promise I'll be more vocal about future parts. There was so much I loved it was hard to get too particular the first time I commented. I just always tend to lurk first before gathering enough courage to say something. But Deception Pass rocks, so it's worth it. *waves around a Deception Pass flag*
Haha, forgive me if I'm a little loopy, it's almost 2:30 am where I am.
Long story short, the insane girl says keep writing. XD
I'd better get back to writing- the next chapter is going to be ginormous. ^_^
A really good chapter all round. I love who you're both adding more here and there, it's very addictive.
Now, a little off-topic, I was just listening to some tracks from the Buffy musical ep, when are wel likely to see, Deception Pass, The Musical? ;)
And it is SO WEIRD that you mentioned Deception Pass, The Musical! Just last night I was listening to something (can't remember what it was) and I thought of that! hahaha! I don't think we'll see that until we get on TV, at any rate. ^_~
Do you think it's sad that I've become a Tristan/Emily shipper? Ha,TES!
*wipes tear* I'm so proud!
I was like, "OMG he's a vampire and they're so in love *fangirl flailing*"
*runs off to reread Deception Pass from the beginning while I wait for you guys to post another part* XD
Completely!
I could eat him.
*_*