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Episode 22-2 - Part 29

  • Aug. 6th, 2006 at 12:12 AM
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Markus stared straight ahead at the road, his teeth clenched tightly. He should have been home hours ago, lounging carelessly in front of the television with Serge. Instead his night had dragged out into total anarchy caused by the lunacy of not only his friends, but his very own grandmother.


Abigail: "The heart makes us do things the mind would never dream of. The price of not helping them was far too high."
Markus: "So you said. That doesn't make killing Mary any less insane."
Abigail: "Mary did not stay dead."
Markus: "She very easily could have."


Abigail: "If it had been Serge, you'd have done no less to save him."
Markus: "No, I'd have gone with James to find a grief councilor."
Abigail: "Your lips speak one thing, but I can see into your heart, Callaloo."


Markus didn't bother with a response, once again turning his attention fully to the road before him. He hated thinking of anything happening to Serge, of what he might to if faced with spending the rest of his life without him. With a deep breath he pushed the thoughts away, still uneasy with the truth of his grandmother's words.


He turned into their driveway, wanting nothing more than to put the night behind him. He turned the car off, hesitating a moment before getting out. Abigail sat unmoving next to him, her eyes sparkling in the darkness.


Markus: "What they did was way beyond stupid, and I'm finished talking about this for tonight."
Abigail: "You've lost none of them. They'll be with you for ages to come. Now let's stop with the foolishness and get inside."

Serge greeted both of them at the door, his smile stretching from ear to ear.


Serge: "Grandma! I wasn't expecting to see you again until next month in LA!"
Abigail: "One cannot hope to go against cosmic will, Serge."
Serge: "How long are you going to be staying with us this time?"
Abigail: "Just until the weekend."


Markus: "Sorry I'm so late."
Serge: "It's ok, I kept dinner in the oven. I figured you'd be home eventually, unless you'd met someone else of course."
Markus: "Of course."
Serge: "So how was work tonight? Anything interesting happen?"


Markus: "Just another typical night saving people's lives…"

Comments

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[identity profile] tenna.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:22 am (UTC)
Oh man. There'll be more after this, right?

God I love this story. Oh man. Love it soooo much. Fantastic storytelling as always. :) Thank y'all for putting all the work into this and sharing it!
[identity profile] ashlienl.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:30 am (UTC)
Thankfully yes; only a SEASON finale.

I'd cry if this was the end :O
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[identity profile] ashlienl.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:29 am (UTC)
GUH. The end. =/ No more parts?! -cries- I dont like cliff hangers. You guys always do this you know? :P Drive us insaaaaaaaaaaane with cliff hangers.

God. I dont think I can surmise this all. Just... so... amazing.

I kept gripping my seat, TERRIFIED that Emily was going to die. And I cried and it all scared me so much. Especially when Mary decided to trade her soul for Emily's. The ultimate friendship there; dying to save one friend, willing to trade your soul for hers.

And Tristan. Poor Tristan. You know he wants her and I bet he feels like there's nothing he can do about it.

Oh god, I hope Emily has no lasting injuries. I can only imagine how badly it had to have hurt to wake up while they were making the icision. GOD I can't imagine that. >.< So much pain.

Poor Deanna. :( I think she's realized the truth. How terrible. She loves him and... he loves Emily.

Guh. Markus. Poor Markus. I wish he'd TRY to understand. :( I wish he wouldn't think them so stupid. Abigail is right. He'd do it for Serge.

Once again you've done it :P The emotional turmoil; laughter and tears and joy and giddiness and all of that. And the way you write, oh my gooood. Even without the pictures, this is all so amazing. Just... the words and descriptions and emotions. It all totally wraps around you and draws you in in the most amazing way.

Guh. I love this.

I love you guys <333333333333333333
[identity profile] tenna.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:57 am (UTC)
Markus right pissed me off this episode. :\ I don't like how he felt the need to step in and put his foot down and control the situation. I think it would have been better for him to just leave instead of meddle.
(no subject) - [identity profile] ashlienl.livejournal.com - Aug. 6th, 2006 12:55 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] knarz.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 09:05 am (UTC)
Markus: "Just another typical night saving people's lives…"

Nice one. ^_^

So, season finale... when's the next season on? Is it dependent on the ratings? ^_^ There are still so many things unanswered and open. *sighs* But it was a fun ride, exciting and well done. Really amazing.

Thanks for sharing this story and for finishing it, too. It must have been quite a project and very time consuming! :)
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 09:46 am (UTC)
So, season finale... when's the next season on?

I think we're taking a bit of a break now, a few weeks off to recover. This episode was exhausting, to say the least. We'll probably get back in the swing of things after DragonCon (end of this month).

Of course, if the muse strikes I'll have to listen to her. My brain is already churning even though it needs a really long nap after this. XD
(no subject) - [identity profile] knarz.livejournal.com - Aug. 13th, 2006 11:22 am (UTC)
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[identity profile] enchanted-black.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 09:22 am (UTC)
Huzzah! *tosses confetti* Season One ends and Season Two looms in the distance. Once again, darlings, you have rocked my entire night and had me glued to my computer. If ever there were storytellers as wickedly funny and cunning as you I would have to accuse them of stealing from you two. I shall wait patiently for Season Two and Azrael (and Glass) wrapped in silky red ribbons nothing more on my doorstep October 13th. Oh wait, I said Christmas not my birthday! Damn!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 09:47 am (UTC)
We could always pretend you'd said your birthday all along. ^_~
(no subject) - [identity profile] enchanted-black.livejournal.com - Aug. 6th, 2006 03:51 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] tez-na-nox.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 09:30 am (UTC)
ok...*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* love how you keep me on my toes every time, with my eyes glued to the screen and my blood pumping, as if praying for more, a yearning of the soul.

It makes it so tempting to worship you as the goddess of sim soaps.
[identity profile] omg-palindrome.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 10:12 am (UTC)
D'aww, Marcus.

Man. I'm so superjealous of your creativity and pretty, pretty sims. :)
[identity profile] rasberrydar.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 12:02 pm (UTC)
This absolutely rocked. Early Sunday morning and I can't believe I've been up a couple of hours already. On the other hand, kind of like Tristan, I feel like so much more time has passed.

Great season finale. Can't wait for next season :D
[identity profile] highvoltagehero.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 12:06 pm (UTC)
Wow, go Markus. It's nice to know some one out of all of them would be willing to let life run with out magic and adventure. XD;

Can't wait until season two.
Need more Jacob. >.>;;
(Anonymous) wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 02:03 pm (UTC)
Just a question, the irate woman who was standing out Azrael's place when he left to find Emily...that was Kat, wasn't it? I love looking at the background details.

Great episode! Champagne and cookies all around!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 06:16 pm (UTC)
Yes it was!! :DDDD
(no subject) - [identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com - Aug. 6th, 2006 08:36 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [identity profile] schizometric.livejournal.com - Aug. 9th, 2006 01:09 am (UTC)
[identity profile] manga-star.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 02:55 pm (UTC)
So.Good. I can't believe this is the season finale. I have totally fallen in love with DP...and Glass, because he's such a hotty. Did I just say hotty? What I mean to say is he's totally yum. Yum works.

This epiode was wonderful, I didn't expect anything less though.Can't wait for season two.
[identity profile] simness.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 03:09 pm (UTC)
wow!
well,what a great episode had me hanging on the cornor of my seat for ages,it all worked out well,they all got back so its great.bit taken by suprise of the boobage of emily waking up lol xxx
[identity profile] emino.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 03:30 pm (UTC)
the ending phrase is perfect!
[identity profile] tsundere.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 03:53 pm (UTC)
Amazing story telling. As with everyone else, I was on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happened.

And dang, I wish I had a friend like that who'd come to the afterlife and save me. lol
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[identity profile] chocobeans.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 05:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for this season. I'm glad you two will be taking a much deserved break. You guys totally need it because you are just that awesome!

All I can say is wow. I can't believe this came online right after the crazy dream I had, which included James! Talk about cosmic timing.

Of course I'm sad this is the season finale but at least I can plot things in my head and come up with possible theories as what will happen next. At least it's just the season finale. Oh the possibilities for the upcoming seasons. =)

I feel like there's more to say but I don't know how to say it. I'm just absolutely concerned for every one of the characters. Even Andy, and that's saying a lot! Brava, girls, brava.
[identity profile] mer--girl.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 06:35 pm (UTC)
Well, you totally deserve a break.

This was awesome, awesome, awesome.

I am very happy with this season's finale! :D
[identity profile] inyri-jax.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 06:56 pm (UTC)
Congratulations on a wonderful Season One!

Both of you did an amazing job, and I am so glad to know Season Two will show up eventually.

Inspired.

HUGZ
[identity profile] anonymeese.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 07:42 pm (UTC)
gaaahhhhhhhhh this was so AMAZING I can't tell you how happy I am that both mary and emily made it out alive and emily kissing tristan - YAY - ugh so awesome eeeeee i love you people.
[identity profile] reclusive.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:43 pm (UTC)
Eee. <-- Pretty much all I can say. I can't wait for the next season!
[identity profile] branstantinople.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
I just wanted to take the opportunity to leave my first comment, and say thank you. You guys are incredibly awesome. :)
[identity profile] prying-pandora.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 12:24 am (UTC)
my least favorite part, coming to the end. Bravo though, brilliant! Kept me guessing the entire time, especially when you threw the Lethe in! With all the trickery, I wasn't sure how that was going to turn out, but it worked out for good, yay!

Seeing the girls parents crying was sad,poor guys, I can't imagine the pain of losing a child. Especially after getting hope like that!

And now, I leave with this. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
[identity profile] shooflea.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 02:21 am (UTC)
Thank you, girls. Amazing job.
[identity profile] evilgeniuskaty.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 03:19 am (UTC)
WHY DOES IT ALWAYS END?
[identity profile] amaryssobellus.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 05:51 am (UTC)
This was great. Again thank you so much. I loved it and hate that it has to end. But I realize that you guys need a break because I was emotionally exhuasted from reading this, I can only imagine what you must have felt like writing and simming this so with that thought in mind I'm going to go to bed (10:49pm in WA and work at 6:15am :-p)and keep my questions for next time. Again thank you. ^_^
[identity profile] ivory-vixen.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 08:18 am (UTC)
awww i hate it when stories end, especially when they are as good as dp T_T

have a good break, and i hope your muse hits harder than ever next season!!
[identity profile] melidere.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2006 11:07 am (UTC)
That was awesome!!! I <3 Serge. And poor Markus, I would feel the same as him if my friends did something like that... but then I would also know I'd do the same thing for the man I love :x Crappy feeling :(((

Wheeee looking forward to next season :)
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