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Episode Nine - Part Seven

  • Jul. 17th, 2005 at 7:34 PM
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Erebus: ::Those vermin don't have your superior hearing, nor can their underdeveloped minds hear me now. Why are you here, James? Why are you letting them into your heart when you know it will only lead to pain for you when their short pathetic lives are finally over?::
James: "...the hell?"


Erebus: ::Our little dance earlier has left me hungry. I believe I'll start with that one- her blood smells so sweet flowing beneath her skin, don't you think? So much fear and pain there...::


Tristan: "Ok, now you're starting to piss me off..."


Erebus: ::Does that loathsome thing mean something to you?::


Erebus: ::Why do you bother trying to fit in with these lowly creatures? You're so much more than they are- you know deep within your very being that they are but weak and cruel animals, preying on each other's worst nightmares.::


Erebus: ::Besides, it's not as if she could ever love you- our kind are monsters to them, Tristan. If she ever found out the truth you hide, she would run from you with the same fear in her eyes that your sisters had all those years ago.::


Erebus: :: Don't worry- it's too dark and you changed back too quickly for them to have noticed anything earlier. The time will come, though, and when it does...::


The air was momentarily filled with the sharp crack of unholy wailing as Emily plunged one of Mary's stakes into the creature's back. She was surprised at the amount of resistance she encountered, the stake stopping only a few inches into Erebus' body and leaving her hand with several splinters.


Completely caught off-guard by the attack, Erebus instinctively turned and ran from the cemetary leaving a sickly trail of blood behind him. This wasn't how it had played out in his mind- those contemptible creatures were supposed to cower before him, not shove carved pieces of wood through his ribcage! Time to get away, to recouperate and get them later.


Emily: "Nobody messes with my friends..."


Tristan: "Are you ok?"
Emily: "I feel a little funny."


Tristan: "Let's get out of here. I don't really want to hang around waiting for that thing to come back, to be honest."
Emily: "I can't believe I missed it's heart."
Tristan: "I thought it was an amazing strike, personally. Thank you, Emily."


Mary: "No such thing as vampires? What was that, then?"
James: "Clearly a local sideshow act has come down with rabies..."

Comments

[identity profile] seafeed.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:12 am (UTC)
Read all your updates.

I cant wait for more O_O
[identity profile] mysimcalledlife.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:18 am (UTC)
Wow, just wow. Can't wait until the next update!
[identity profile] my-sims-reality.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:40 am (UTC)
Read all the way from the first update of this set and just wanted to say your locations and settings are fabulous as usual. Especially the lab!

And I'm so happy to see Chris again. ;) *swoons*
[identity profile] prescilla-bean.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:44 am (UTC)
wow, great story so far. can't wait till your next chapter. ^_^
[identity profile] hoorahbaby.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 04:04 am (UTC)
[identity profile] ambly.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 04:45 am (UTC)
James: "Clearly a local sideshow act has come down with rabies..."

Good Lord I love that.

I always read him with a British accent.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 04:53 am (UTC)
So much of James comes from my husband, who's English, so that's probably why. ^_^
[identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 05:01 am (UTC)
Yes! Still lovin' it!
[identity profile] 99beauty-scars.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 06:31 am (UTC)
i totally cracked up when i saw "Erebus" running towards James and Tristan in part 6. i dont know why but i found that really funny. :D

on a side note, i LOVE how you showed both James and Tristan turning into vampires. I was like .. " I KNEW IT! " i just had a feeling all along.

i love this story , its like a soap to me. Your pics, and Sims, and the story itself is so amazing. you are REALLY good at this. :)
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:08 pm (UTC)
I was laughing so hard I was nearly in tears while I was doing that whole scene! ^_~

We're really diving into the story now- it's very exciting for us!
[identity profile] 99beauty-scars.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 11:17 pm (UTC)
i'm glad i'm not the only one who found that very funny.
for a moment, i thought i was just being retarded.
when i laughed at it last night, my boyfriend, turned and looked at me like i was crazy. :D haha
[identity profile] versus-science.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 07:34 am (UTC)
I love this so much. :)
[identity profile] bellznwhistlez.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 01:55 pm (UTC)
two words: holy cow!

this story is so awesome and i'm constantly checking to see if you updated. i loved how you made James and Tristan vampires, it was great!
[identity profile] eloise.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 02:19 pm (UTC)
This story gets better every chapter. Simply brilliant.

I can't help but think it would also look pretty excellent if you printed it out and made an actual book out of it. I'd buy it!

Who needs Harry Potter when you have this!
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 03:11 pm (UTC)
Thanks!!!!

If it ever makes it to book/script form, we'll send you a signed copy! ^_^
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[identity profile] jadeakira.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 05:02 pm (UTC)
Why watch TV when I have this?

Jade, is the best mad scientist ever.
[identity profile] hellohalo.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2005 06:43 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] weasley-hobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2005 08:40 pm (UTC)
Absolutely amazing, per your usual! Can't wait for more.

P.S. If you guys don't stop, this will rival Harry Potter. *wink* ;)
[identity profile] value-meal-2.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 22nd, 2005 05:00 am (UTC)
This is awesome! I just read all the chapters. How did you get him to be stabbed? Is there a cheat/DL that does that?
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 22nd, 2005 05:23 pm (UTC)
Adobe Photoshop! ^_^
[identity profile] taintedsavior.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2005 01:16 pm (UTC)
Excellent job, as always :)

When is chapter 8 coming out??
[identity profile] taintedsavior.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2005 01:16 pm (UTC)
err Part 8
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2005 02:28 pm (UTC)
I'll be posting Chapter 10 today- it's another really long one. ^_^
[identity profile] taintedsavior.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2005 02:44 pm (UTC)
Ah ok so there were only 7 parts in chapter 9? Good deal!! Can't wait to see it!
[identity profile] beautysims1979.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 29th, 2005 11:40 am (UTC)
*CLAPS*

:D:D:D
[identity profile] simsbarbie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:57 pm (UTC)
haha! James.