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Episode 15.2 - Part 9

  • Oct. 12th, 2005 at 5:03 PM
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Early the next morning, Mary made her way back to the hospital. She walked slowly down the hallway, the buzzing of the fluorescent lights filling her head. She'd been too wound up to sleep anymore the previous night after getting Emily home. James and Tristan had left just before sunrise, neither of them speaking much about what had gone on in their respective dream worlds.

Within a few minutes she was standing just outside room 314. She took a deep breath and pushed the door open.


Dr. Sutherland: "Mary..."
Mary: "Um, hi."

Mary looked around nervously, clutching Kat's charts tightly behind her back. She backed up to a table in the corner and dropped the papers onto it.

Dr. Sutherland: "Why are you here?"
Mary: "It's visiting hours. I'm allowed!"

Dr. Sutherland sighed and lead Mary out of the room.


Mary: "What happened?"
Dr. Sutherland: "Ms. Wilson died last night."

Mary blinked up at the doctor.

Mary: "How? Why? I mean... clearly she wasn't in the best of health, but she'd been holding on for so long..."


Dr. Sutherland: "We believe she had a seizure. Her readings went off the chart quite suddenly. A nurse reached her quickly, but it was too late. If someone had gotten there sooner... well. They didn't. The seizure was violent, her spinal cord snapped just above the 5th cervical vertebra. She died almost instantly from spinal shock."
Mary: "All that... from a seizure?"

Dr. Sutherland took of his glasses and rubbed his eyes before putting them back on. He took a deep breath and paused before answering.


Dr. Sutherland: "It's unusual, yes."

Mary could see there was something else he wanted to say, but he didn't. She didn't push. He gave her one last look before walking down the hallway. Mary watched until he turned the corner, then took one final look into Kat's room before letting the door swing shut.

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[identity profile] loweryourwand.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 01:14 am (UTC)
oh god oh godddddddd oh god.
[identity profile] frayed1989.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 01:19 am (UTC)
dun dun dun!!!
well, at least we know she died peacfully.... right?????? *raises an eyebrow*
[identity profile] my-sims-reality.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 02:03 am (UTC)
I'm almost at a loss for words. I mean, WOW. I knew this was coming but still, when I actually read it, the shock was just as intense as though I hadn't had in inkling it would lead to this...

You guys are simply fabulous!
[identity profile] unbound-chaos.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 02:33 am (UTC)
Oh my God. I cried. :( Poor Markus.
[identity profile] deelybopper.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 03:00 am (UTC)
...WHO-HA?!?!
OH MAH GOD-DIDDY-OD.
i'm like freakin' out...
though i have to say, that whole "you dream about my bedroom?" thing was HILARIOUS.

[identity profile] jaenanda.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 03:03 am (UTC)
I don't know if I'm a bigger Mary/James shipper or a bigger Tristan/Emily shipper.

And, dude- Emily's a slob????? That makes so much sense!
[identity profile] 99beauty-scars.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 03:17 am (UTC)
James: "Do you always dream about my bedroom?"
Tristan: "Yes, James. Every day I dream we live together in wedded bliss."
James: "Wait… really?"
Tristan: "No. Sorry to disappoint."


HAHAHA! i totally love that. James has the best sense of humor ever!

i saw you!!!!!! haha

anyway oh my god Markus KILLED HER!
[identity profile] browneyedwigwam.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 05:05 am (UTC)
omg! every new chapter i always think "wow
this is definately my favorite one!!" and
then the next one is totally awesome too.
you are such a great writer...when i saw
ron popeil i died laughing. totally great!
[identity profile] prescilla-bean.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 05:37 am (UTC)
ok, wait i'm kinda slow tonight.. did Markus break her back? lol
[identity profile] rosewalker.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 17th, 2005 02:33 pm (UTC)
Whoops, you aren't slow... I added 'cervical.' Fifth cervical vertebra, which is in the neck. Although, the image of Markus doing some crazy WWF move and snapping Kat's back over his knee is really amusing me right now.
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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_kismetx/ wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 05:42 am (UTC)
when i saw there was a new update, it instantly made my day a WHOLE LOT BETTER. thank you :)

dude, Tristan/Emily. Aghskjelkls. it needs to happen. soon.

looooveddd this. i need moorrreee tristan updates!
[identity profile] eelyme.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 01:52 pm (UTC)
Tristan/Emily. Aghskjelkls. it needs to happen. soon.

totally agreed.

This story is excellent, by the way :D
[identity profile] rainbow1nk.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 01:45 pm (UTC)
It's just amazing how your story just keeps topping the last. I can't wait for the next part.

Get crackin! :)
[identity profile] darkestvoices.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 02:06 pm (UTC)
This was fabulous. The whole thing with Emily really breaks my heart. As does the way Tristan longs after her. But that's because I think you should get those two together ASAP.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
And thanks again for the trailer. It was awesome. The music really fit it.
[identity profile] pgh-anarchist.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 04:02 pm (UTC)
Another awesome story. You are one gifted writer! I loved the Ron Popeil "appearance" *falls off chair laughing*

This came at a great time, I was dying for a good Sims story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
[identity profile] the-lost-sims.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 04:48 pm (UTC)
I love this story so much. I come home after school and check this every single day, the way you right is so detailed.

I've been lurking for some time now but I decided that it would be better if I posted. The reason I haven't up till now is that I was kind of embarrassed.

I love the outfits and hairstyles the characters have too especially Tristan and Markus’s hair.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 18th, 2005 01:27 am (UTC)
Don't be embarrassed to comment! We LOVE comments! They make us work faster... ^_~
[identity profile] kitaoroshi.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 04:59 pm (UTC)
Yay! Update! Lovely as always I must say. ^_^;;

I love how Abigail just knows everything. ^_^ Heh. One awesome grandmother to have.

Oh my goodness Emily!! Wah! That Ian chap needs a good strong beating. Several actually. I do wonder what exactly had happened between the two. ::noin-subtle poking::

I also wonder how Markus will be affected after he helped Kat cross over.

And the cameo! Talk about close encounters with their maker. ^_^ Heh.

The dynamics between those James and Tristan are just wonderful. Dry humor at its best. ^_^

Can't wait for more! ^_^
[identity profile] obigrrl.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 07:39 pm (UTC)
more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[identity profile] lostnasimworld.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 13th, 2005 11:46 pm (UTC)
You picked a fine time to leave me hanging, I WANT MORE!!!
[identity profile] azraela.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2005 05:11 am (UTC)
I LOVE your stories!! I found you last night on [livejournal.com profile] thesims2 and have gone through everything in the past 24 hours or so! You're an awesome writer, and my god, the outfits and the hair and everything! God, listen to me act like a fangirl. Really though, keep up the fantastic work.
[identity profile] aikea-guinea.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 18th, 2005 01:28 am (UTC)
haha Glad you found us!! I guess it *is* a lot to take in if you haven't been following from the start!

Thanks for commenting!
[identity profile] eloise.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2005 11:01 am (UTC)
Tristan! Tristan! Tristan!

How god, seriously, I am not quite sure how I feel about having a crush on a Sim :/
lol
[identity profile] krzzt.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2005 09:17 pm (UTC)
whoa, great episode. they keep getting better and better. i really noticed everyone's realistic eye colors in this episode, mary's especially. oh and sigh, mary/james are just the best.
[identity profile] beautysims1979.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2005 09:46 pm (UTC)
Wow :O

I have got so far behind in one of my favourite stories. University has taken it out of me - and I haven't commented here in a long time.

I just wanted to let you guys know how much I love this. Seriously. This has to be one of the best long-running sims stories out there.

[identity profile] heatherizcool.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 14th, 2005 11:21 pm (UTC)
Finally getting around to commenting.....

This chapter was so wonderful!! There were so many great moments... I squealed like the fangirl that I am when Emily whispered Tristan's name in her angelic sleep state. I imagine you only whisper the name of your one true love while in an angelic sleep state, and what name did she whisper? "Andy"? I don't think so. "Tristan"! Ohhhh yeah.

Also, I forgot to mention when I commented on the last section that Ian is the perfect name for Emily's evil ex... Michelle's evil ex is named Ian, and he is so heinous we all lovingly refer to him as Satan these days. Needless to say my association with that name has ruined it in my eyes forever... so it really is the perfect name for that particular character.

Mary and Emily sloooowly inch closer to realizing James and Tristan are vampires... when they caught James going for Kat's neck I was certain the truth would be revealed, but alas... "You know, Mr. 'There's-No-Such-Thing-As-Vampires' seems to like to dream he is one." One day... one day soon they'll find out. They'd better, anyway. Why are the boys so afraid to tell them? Markus knows and he's perfectly fine with it. Hmmm, I suppose it would be a little traumatizing at first... oh well, all in due time.

The part with Markus and Kat in the field of flowers made me very teary.

Best lines this time around:

James: "Do you always dream about my bedroom?"
Tristan: "Yes, James. Every day I dream we live together in wedded bliss."
James: "Wait… really?"
Tristan: "No."

This was wonderful as well:

Tristan opened his eyes and found himself staring straight into James' smiling face.

Tristan: "It would appear that I've failed to wake up and am now stuck in a nightmare."
Mary: "Welcome to my world."

Hehehehehe. Mary and James are so in lurrrrrve! Le sigh.

And OMGTRISTANPUTEMILYINBEDANDKISSEDHER *gasp for air* ANDHEWASCRYINGANDHISEYELINERRANANDITWASREALLYREALLYHOT!!!!!11~~2

Also, it would appear someone who looks an awful lot like Danielle has appeared in a diner. And her name is Elise. And she's looking for Andy. Things are going to get very interesting very soon, I wager...

Finally, I really love Mary's hair in the last part. She sure looks good for hunky Dr. Sutherland. I knew Markus must have helped Kat "cross over" to the spirit world... (He should get his own psychic TV show... Crossing Over with Markus Aurelius) At least she isn't stuck in her dream state anymore, and won't take any more hostages, vampiric or otherwise...

Wonderful installment all around.

And I'm in the next one!! WOOOOT! I can't wait. XD
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[identity profile] jadeakira.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 17th, 2005 05:52 pm (UTC)
HAHAH! I love your icon!
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[identity profile] speak-algebraic.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 17th, 2005 04:41 pm (UTC)
I HAVE FINALLY CAUGHT UP!
thank you for the entertainment and i simply cannot wait for the new episode
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[identity profile] jadeakira.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 17th, 2005 05:51 pm (UTC)
*sigh* I think I'm totally lusting for some James/Tristan action now. Heehee!

The love the way the two of you are writing this, it's just so... well, completely enjoyable to read. You've managed to hit on a number of my emotions, but I'm all emotionless with things most of the time, so you're doing something right. :)
[identity profile] amaryssobellus.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 18th, 2005 02:29 pm (UTC)
FINALLY COUGHT UP!!!!
Ok it took me longer than what I thought it would take me because real life took over when I had to go to work and all. But I would still check it out at work even though I really really shouldn't...but it's not like they can fire me. ha.

Anyways on to the real topic. You guys ROCK! I love everything about this story and I can't wait to get the next udate, this is like my daily soap now...well more like my mintue by mintue soap.

Two thumbs up.
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